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Sigils[edit]
It is probably better to communicate via talk pages rather than edit logs.
I'm happy to see someone else working on BM stuff since I don't have as much time to devote to it as I once did. However, I do have some comments. I'll use the Water Sigil as an example.
The article feels cluttered breaking its 5 sentences into 6 sections, one of which is empty. I suspect the Water Sigil is not interesting enough to justify more than one paragraph. In fact, I think most of the sigils are simple enough that a single paragraph would suffice. I am inclined to remove all the sections except Recipe and replace the summary with something like:
- The Water Sigil is an item from Blood Magic which creates water. For 100 LP, using the Sigil will place a water source block in the world or add one bucket of water to a tank. When socketed into Bound Armor, it grants water breathing.
Also, title casing the effects and bound armor effects on Sigil looks strange to me. These descriptions are sentence fragments, not titles. It makes more sense to use "Grants the user temporary flight" (perhaps not even capitalizing grants) rather than "Grants The User Temporary Flight". I'd go further and elide "the user" for "Grants temporary flight". Actually, I'm not sue that calling what the Air Sigil does temporary flight is accurate, but
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